for my portfolio I'm going to rewrite the should the obama age drop out analysis paper. the strength of my paper was the introduction i think i worked really good on the intro and i states my thesis very well and i also states my argument. my weakness of my paper i think is that i didnt focus that well on my topic and i didnt fully understand the article i read so i winged it.
to effectively rewrite my paper i must re read the article many times so i can better understand the article and understand what the arthur is talking about. i think once i do that my paper well overall be better because i will have more information to talk about. i will also back up my arguments and make sure that i have information to back up my statements.
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