#12

I think my most compelling evidence is that dwayne wade has had the best nba finals performance in nba history.the reason why i say that is because he has had the best stats in the finals and also brought his team back from being 2-0 in a 7 game series and averaging 39 points in the last 4 games to bring his team back to win the championship in only his 3rd year in the nba.

my weakest evidence is that dwayne wade has only won one championship. while the Great Micheal jordan has won it 6 times and also has had memorable performances in the finals. like playing while having a fever and playing with an injury. but i still stand by my choice because Wades performance was amazing because i witnessed him win the 4 games in the row while only being so young in the nba and going up against  the best team in the nba at that time.

Assignment #10

i think peer review helps a lot in the process of writing papers. even though i don't show it in class sometimes i think that it helps a lot because i learn a lot from my peers. one way we can improve peer review is to make it serious is we need to be serious about the whole thing because i can tell you that I'm not always paying attention and so is some other people. i think we have a good amount of time when it comes to peer review its just no one takes it serious. my ideal peer review process is everyone having the papers done when there due so we can grade them and everyone taking it serious.

assignment # 9

my plans for college are to major in justice studies. this class fits perfectly to my major i think. the reason why i say that is because to be a lawyer you need to be able to write a lot of paper to fight for your client. i think this class is the stepping stone to doing that there are many classes to take after this class so i can try to prefect that. but you always need to start at the beginning and this is the class to start at.

Assignment #11

the errors I've noticed that i usually do on each paper are grammatical errors i think this error is something easy that i can fix i just need to be more patient with how quickly i write things.

  I've been told by many teachers that i always have a good foundation but i can never completely help hold up my paper. i think once i start to help build my paper more i think i can be a great paper writer.

another error that i tend to due is my conclusion i always find it hard to close out a paper. the reason why i think i mess up on that is because i am tired and already mentally darned that i just give up at the end and i think once i stop doing that i will be ok at that part.

 those are three things i need to work on and i am starting to work on them and i think after I've been told so many times to fix these errors I've finally understood that i need to fix them.

"Blow Your Mind"

Purpose: The purpose of this is ad is to sell food of course. But they took a whole different approach by having a girl with her mouth open and saying it will blow your mind away. 
Audience: I think the Audience of this ad is everyone but especially men. The reason why i say men mostly is because it has the 3 favorite things men like. Food, Girls, Sexual Meaning. what i mean is that the word Blow means in slang is when a girl gives Oral Sex.
Genre:this add was every strange, especially coming from burger king. i was shocked when i seen this ad because i wouldn't think that burger king would stoop so slow just to sell a burger. 

Assignment #6

well this paper is a whole different ball game. its like i went from playing basketball to playing soccer. the reason why i say that is because our first paper we talked to do a narrative paper and we had to talk about ourselves from our point of view. in this paper we are talking about ads and how they are most of the time wrong in so many ways. in this paper im going to have to do some research about the certain brand thats being advertised in my ad and also who its targeting. after i do that i have to try to put myself in the ad makers shoes to see what he was trying to sell.

Assignment #3- "Good" Papers

the difference between a good paper and a bad paper is quality over quantity. what i mean by that is i would rather right a 2 page paper that explains everything clearly than right a 6 page paper and no one understands what i said. To me the three things that separate a good paper from a bad paper are. the structure of the paper, also grammar.

Quality over quantity- you want your paper to be informative, you don't need a 6 page paper just to make yourself look smart.If you write a short paper with a lot of detailed information to me that's a better paper.
The Structure- When your building a house, the first thing you do is generate the ideas of how you want the house to look like, then you build the foundation. Same thing with a paper you  can't just start writing you need to think things clearly. just like how you need a foundation when your building a house you need one also when writing a paper.
Grammar- The most important thing you could mess up on in a paper. You need to make sure that your paper flows good and also that your paper has correct spelling.

I think the easiest thing for me is the structure of the paper. i dont just sit down and right. i think things clearly and i make sure it makes sense in my head i also make sure it flows perfectly.